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Elara
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For some reason I am just super pleased that you used the term revenant. It doesn't get used enough. But yes, a very nice poem, and I also liked the progression.
Phoenixocracy
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I like progressive change, and the poem overall.

Good job
Cteno
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A beautiful ghost
Stunning, entrancing,
No matter how hard I try,
I can never speak to you

A lovely apparition
Gorgeous, fascinating,
No matter how hard you try,
You can never keep me from caring

A graceful revenant
Pleasant, alluring,
No matter what we try,
We can never agree

A forlorn phantom
Gloomy, miserable,
No matter what you try,
Your heart is in agony
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