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| Elara Posts: 6043/9736 |
For some reason I am just super pleased that you used the term revenant. It doesn't get used enough. But yes, a very nice poem, and I also liked the progression. |
| Phoenixocracy Posts: 2154/2746 |
I like progressive change, and the poem overall.
Good job  |
| Cteno Posts: 1577/3416 |
A beautiful ghost
Stunning, entrancing, No matter how hard I try, I can never speak to you A lovely apparition Gorgeous, fascinating, No matter how hard you try, You can never keep me from caring A graceful revenant Pleasant, alluring, No matter what we try, We can never agree A forlorn phantom Gloomy, miserable, No matter what you try, Your heart is in agony |
