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05-02-24 06:55 PM
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Xeogaming Forums - Muses' Sanctuary - New song, less crap.
  
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Cairoi
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Hmm...You are a really good guitarist, man. Here is Cairoi to offer his suggestions!

In the beginning, around the 0:40-0:50s region, I don't know, but the notes clashed together and I didn't like it. Maybe it's just personal opinion, but yeah, that part started to discourage me.

Like you mentioned yourself some of the transitions seemed to be lacking. I think that all the riffs in this song are good, but they might not fit into the song the way they're written, I'd break them all down and get all the riffs sharing a sound-motif. Ex. 1:35 dreamy guitar I think didn't fit with the rest of the song.

However, these riffs are all really good, and I was like headbanging to the 3:20ish solo. Your guitar makes me think of Dynasty Warriors.

So yeah, rocking song dude. With some touching up and a smattering of bass and drum this could be a fucking kickass song.
Kard Ayals
Posts: 1680/2915
I lied about the less crap part
CLick here, the song is Battle of The Slayers

Critism stuff, stuff and more stuff.

Transition between riffs sucks (and sometime pretty much doesn't exist)

(hopefully I won't hate it tommorow)
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