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Since: 09-05-04
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Posted on 01-22-06 08:37 PM Link | Quote
Edit: Took out layout

From the tears of a newborn Lotus

Lyrics By: Dale Hall
Vocals By: Dale Hall

Sixth condemned by that loved one
Forever falling, never recovering
A barrier penetrated by God’s new light
Ruled over the breath of a testimony bright.

THE TEARS FOREVER PILLAR!
FEARS NEVER FORGIVEN,
YOUR LIES ARE BUT MOCKERY,
FEED MY ANGRY ADDICTION!

Hollow wars beckon within the newborn
Constantly threatened, never moving.
Like a chilled oppression of my absolution
Take its stems that were once created from this conclusion…

THE TEARS FOREVER PILLAR!
FEARS NEVER FORGIVEN,
YOUR LIES ARE BUT MOCKERY,
FEED MY ANGRY ADDICTION!

“And so it came to pass that resurrection within me shall become anew, Like a shallow grave from the dying phoenix shall become once again resurrected into a stronger more absolute being…but too soon fell from this telled heart…”

THE TEARS FOREVER PILLAR!
FEARS NEVER FORGIVEN,
YOUR LIES ARE BUT MOCKERY,
FEED MY ANGRY ADDICTION!

Reflect upon the mirrors of the dews
Sudden swallows and heafty crews.
Her burden swells my yolk and the age defers…
ITS ALL IN MOMENT, ENOUGH OF THE LIES!

(Repeat X2)
THE TEARS FOREVER PILLAR!
FEARS NEVER FORGIVEN,
YOUR LIES ARE BUT MOCKERY,
FEED MY ANGRY ADDICTION!

“CAN YOU HEAR ME NOW LIAR!? I CAN FEEL YOUR HATRED! ENOUGH OF THESE TEARS! FORGIVING YOUR PATHETIC TELLED HEART WILL NEVER COMPLETE THE ANGER THAT FEEDS MY ADDICTION!”










(Last edited by Sajin Gorotto on 01-22-06 11:37 PM)
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Thief








Since: 05-29-05
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Posted on 01-22-06 09:52 PM Link | Quote
very angry and sad lyrics but I like it, good job
Bitmap

#1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt








Since: 09-05-04
From: His Laughin' Place

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Posted on 01-22-06 11:31 PM Link | Quote
You should have heard me on the microphone when I first tried that song...The Drummer, Frenning, was toatally amazed on what I can actually do when it comes to singing and screaming....cant sing good, but I can sure as hell give those dull growls everyone knows and loves....

Hopefully if I get the songs recorded on a better computer, someday Ill post the songs recorded on here someday...but for now, these are meer poetry from my "Beloved" heart...
Elara

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Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

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Posted on 01-25-06 12:20 AM Link | Quote
My only constructive criticism is that the first line of the chorus sounds weird, like it's missing a word or something. Unless you can explain what it means by "tears forever pillar".

Good otherwise.
Bitmap

#1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt








Since: 09-05-04
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Posted on 01-25-06 12:50 PM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Elara
"tears forever pillar".
Good otherwise.


Meaning tears are forever piling up like pillars...its basicially emphsizing that I cry alot...
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