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caxama

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Since: 06-22-05
From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine

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Posted on 02-10-06 01:20 PM Link | Quote
Ok, I know this sounds strange, but I have an idea to propose: I'm going to right two lines, and then I'd like you, any of you to add two lines of your own.It's like those stories where each person takes a turn telling a part of it, but this is a poem.

So, here are my two lines:

I wish I was on the other side of the mirror,
So I wouldn't have to face my refelction.
















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Since: 09-05-04
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Posted on 02-10-06 02:32 PM Link | Quote
For chills of my absolution prevails,
hopeless ways reflect and hurt like nails...

Edit from here forth in this thread: Taking out Layout


(Last edited by Sajin Gorotto on 02-10-06 05:32 PM)
caxama

Archer








Since: 06-22-05
From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine

Since last post: 6422 days
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Posted on 02-27-06 12:25 PM Link | Quote
I alone must walk this path
Face the fury,face the wrath
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Since: 09-05-04
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Posted on 02-27-06 12:54 PM Link | Quote
Of chilling times and hurting rhymes
faithful days and saddend games

Bloddy trails and nightengails
hooded viels and lightning-tales

Faces alone in absolution
caxama

Archer








Since: 06-22-05
From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine

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Posted on 03-01-06 12:15 PM Link | Quote
Don’t look with your blind eye
Don’t turn a deaf ear.
Don’t think that I’m lying,
Or you simply won’t hear.
Bitmap

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Since: 09-05-04
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Posted on 03-01-06 02:08 PM Link | Quote
Look with a true eye
Listen with your feeling ear
Never assume of the hiding
So you will know im here

OOC: Loving this!



(Last edited by Sajin of the Gorotto Sea on 03-01-06 05:09 PM)
caxama

Archer








Since: 06-22-05
From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine

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Posted on 03-02-06 10:13 AM Link | Quote
I walk in the night
Calling up the carnel needs
The lust, the wants, the taunts
Find the prey within the hour of
Deep Midnight
Watch the Angel
But don't get close
My hour is at hand
And yet, there is one, who will never
Understand


This is so awsome it's : Awsome Possum! (colorguard joke, means it's really really good) You guys, this looks so good,you both have major talented...I'm really glad that it was you two that answer this and not someone that would completely change the tone of what this has become...I love you guys!
Bitmap

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Since: 09-05-04
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Posted on 03-02-06 11:46 AM Link | Quote
A little twisted fait portrays
The feelings that are left astray
The tip of her fethers wither
As I began to bicker

Holding my hand out forth
Wanting a connecting hoard
Of that warmpth so loving
Redemption day is soon coming

OOT: Its just me and you, so you love me or something?

I have like 4 folders filled to the rim with poems, im pretty experienced...Wish I had a better expanded vocabulary
caxama

Archer








Since: 06-22-05
From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine

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Posted on 03-03-06 10:20 AM Link | Quote
Really, it's just you and me, oh, I forgot about that.
That's awsome that you have so much in poetry...if you want to expand your vocabulary try using word and then shift+ F7, that will bring up a thesaurus, then you can do what I do, play around with it until you find something you like instead of the only word you can think of...thanks.bye
Bitmap

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Since: 09-05-04
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Posted on 03-05-06 10:26 PM Link | Quote
Woah were done?

I kinda wanted to keep going!
caxama

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Since: 06-22-05
From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine

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Posted on 03-09-06 06:06 PM Link | Quote
woah.. no sweet heart, I never said that we were done. Hell, we could go on for as long as you would like. Just keep posting and I will too.
You rock for this, you know that right?

sorry, I'd offer something but I A) have to get to practice (colorguard) and B) can't think of anything to say...

HUG AND A PIXI STICK (if you don't get that then check my profile)
Bitmap

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Since: 09-05-04
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Posted on 03-09-06 08:50 PM Link | Quote
Alright, I guess ill add another batch of lines then....

Sweat gleams as my withering self esteem
grows tiering as my soul begins to die

The soul redeems for strength
The mind searches for faith

The body wants to love and hold
as our destiny begins to fold and mold

Forever it seems in our endless eternity
a fatheming grasp at our destiny

Please whisper in my ear the kingdom
A forever palace of an undying fathom

________
OOT:...Wah :: Karate chops ::
caxama

Archer








Since: 06-22-05
From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine

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Posted on 03-13-06 12:20 PM Link | Quote
Oh my that was great!

I feel intimidated...mommy
I'm only kidding...that was really really really great, have I ever told you that I love your writting, and the imagery is incredible?

*Huggs*

Do I truely wish to go quitely into the night?
Is giving up my only choice

My soul reaches further
Searching for the light

My mind reels

Though my body may be bruised, battered, broken
My heart, my spirit
Will love and hold
The destiny that I choose to mold

Eternity is endless
Watch the ebbing of the tides

Though I cannot fathem destiny
I can learn to live in reality.

I will not walk in the valley in the shadow of death
For it is not Death I follow and yearn for

It is Life
It is Hope

That I will search for
Bitmap

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Posted on 03-13-06 02:07 PM Link | Quote
With the eyes of unspoken,
yet the lives are not taken

Follow the timeline of forever society
and life will end, together in harmony
caxama

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Since: 06-22-05
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Posted on 03-13-06 04:25 PM Link | Quote
Wow, that sounds so good that I don't know wether to add to it or to say let's send it to print...what do you think?

I don't know what to think
Things have become so
So
.......

I can't think of the words...
Bitmap

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Since: 09-05-04
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Posted on 03-13-06 11:15 PM Link | Quote
Its your poem, you end it when you feel like

in all honesty...the title shouldnt be called "A World of many Talants"...dosent suit the mood of the poem...

Im thinking of "Timelife"

And that word your looking for...Is it "Attoning"?

( Meaning that the pureness of the poem is at its need )
caxama

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Since: 06-22-05
From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine

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Posted on 03-14-06 01:39 PM Link | Quote
*giggles a little*

Actually dear, I kinda added a line or 3 for the poem.

world of many talents was simply a statement to get someone like you to pay attention to it.

Timelife sounds cool, and I'm not sure if you ment to but Attoning sounds pretty good for a title.

And it's as much your poem as it is mine, after all, you've contributed as much if not more than I have to it.
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Posted on 03-14-06 01:43 PM Link | Quote
Oh...then I guess you finish it whenever you want to...

Heres my lines

As glimmering birth fades
Into a withering death glades

Our bond shall slowly fade
With only a memory of loving bane
caxama

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Since: 06-22-05
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Posted on 03-14-06 06:39 PM Link | Quote
You are sweet, did you know that?

Thanks for doing this, it's been really helpful, in that it I can see things that I can do and that I can see another person's style next to my own and it shows me more of myself in a way.Thank you.



Will I stand the test of Time?
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Since: 09-05-04
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Posted on 03-15-06 08:39 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by caxama
You are sweet, did you know that?


:: Shrugs :: I dont really know how to reply to something like that but uhh...Thanks?

Will the test of time withstand?
Of morning glooms and wedding bands?

Of flames to ponder
And blist to gander

Of my selfish desire
to love your attire
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