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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt          Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4347 days Last activity: 4340 days |
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| Something im working on....
Chapter one Dreaming a little dream. Thats what God decided to let my peace be while I rested up to fight for the higher class I fought for. My muscles twitched a bit from the pulses my brain waves sent out. And all I could have asked for was something a bit more peaceful, but with heavy climbs and rainfalls, the room I was sleeping in was like a prison cell to a normal human. I can feel the ice escape my gasping lungs, as if breathing through a glacier, I kept gasping the geleton-like material into my lungs while I drempt my little dream. Very soon I would realise that I had to awaken into the corrupted sin humans made. A world where humans lived in...Monsters I can feel bubbles trickle upward on my body. Soon the water slowly trickled down my spine, and I began to vomit up the scientific substance I was treated for. The tubes jolted out of my mouth and out from my eyes, I was able to see in front of me two blurry scientists wearing what seemed to be white lab coats. As my vision began to clear, one of them I noticed had the cutest pair of breasts I have ever seen. Her eyes were hiding behind a thick pair of glasses, her hair gleamed a silky blue, and a noticable mole just inches above her lips. Next to her was her partner of sorts, a skinny fellow whose hair covered his gleaming spectacles, like what you would seem a normal male scientist would look like. "Good morning Sajin..." Breasts spoke, her hips were the medium of where her hands rested on, as if wanting to seduce me, but on her hands she carried notes of some sort. Her partner kept adjusting his glasses, and my eyes were fixed on her tits. "You have another mission to accomplish..." Damnit, hearing those words it seems the counsol uses me as a dispoable pawn of sorts, and those words always echoed inside of my enhanced brain. I gasped in some more air and blinked my eyes a bit, trying to adjust my eyes better so I can see who was talking to me. My eyes were then fixed on the male scientist who stepped forward a bit with nervousness it seemed. He adjusted his glasses a bit and said. "We-well...E-e-everything seems to be in operational status..." He hesitated a bit, he turned back a bit to look at tits with this nervous expression. "...Since the last time we sent him his injuries havent quite healed yet...Though his muscle efficenty is above normal paramaters, im sure it would be safe to let him accomplish this mission." The restraints opened from my hands as if I was finally being released from a medieval prison. It felt good having my sences feel the icy wet floor I so longed wanted to feel. I slowly began to stand up, nude, and about to accept my next mission. Tits looked at me with her gleeming green eyes. I could smell what seemed like jungle sents, so wanting to just grasp her hair and breathe in her heavenly scent, but doing so would get me executed, and I just want to keep pressing on to live in this monsterous world. Tits walked up to me and crouched down next to me, My knee was on the floor as if kneeling to a king, I felt unworthy to have my body open to such a lady, that, and I was a little tierd. "Hey.." her heavenly voice started. "After this you can finally have a break..." She smiled a bit and scratched behind my ears. Somehow she knew that I liked it, but today it seemed like I first met her, and it was obvious on the way she was treating me that she knew my entire lifetime. "Now..." She stood up and loked at her clipboard. "Your mission is simple, investigate and eliminate the terrorist group in sector 4 in a urban city called 'Talon' not to far from where this lab is...And Sajin..." My eyes turned and looked up at her once again. "This is the last time the goverment wants you...When your done you can stay at my place..." She winked and walked out of the room with a glamorous walk. Her ass shifted like how a real woman's supposed to...I stood up and looked over at the male scientist, who looked behind him and picked up a heavy box of sorts. "H-h-here..." he stuttered. "Your th-things..." Inside I pulled out my leather pants, a pair of gloves that weighed to my fancy, and a pack of slim cigars for my likings. I shook the cigars in my hand, smiled, then looked over at the kid. "You can rest easy..." I assured him..."Im not going to bite..." The kid smiled, bowed to me, and left the room. One thing's for sure....Once I was done with this mission, I can finally be free to my liking, and begin searching for that 'someone'. |
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Cairoi This isn't about you and your loud mouth, This is about me and my fucking beard. Since: 08-29-04 From: PA Since last post: 4638 days Last activity: 4262 days |
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| XD Way to stick it to the man, Saijin. Very masculine writing you got there. It's a nice style and fits the character. Tits....was her last name McGee?
Tits McGee... XD |
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Xeios You WANKER! Since: 08-16-04 Since last post: 4864 days Last activity: 1174 days |
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pretty good, really puts you in the mind of a big burly manly man. I like the dorky scientist and of course Tits. Good writing style, good form overall, the only problem I can even identify is no more than a mere series of grammatical/spelling errors. Then again, that's what editors are for.  |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4347 days Last activity: 4340 days |
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| Well, I dont have microsoft word...And I know I need to proofread this story many a time in order to get the damn thing right...
But im on Chapter 3 at the moment, its on my Father's Laptop...Ill upload it when I get it back Untill then, think you can point out some of the problems on there? Buside the spelling errors? Ill edit this post with Chapter 2 & 3 when I can, or post it when one of youse guys post something else |
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Cairoi This isn't about you and your loud mouth, This is about me and my fucking beard. Since: 08-29-04 From: PA Since last post: 4638 days Last activity: 4262 days |
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Dreaming a little dream. That’s what God decided to let my peace be while I rested up to fight for the higher class I fought for. My muscles twitched a bit from the pulses my brain waves sent out. And all I could have asked for was something a bit more peaceful, but with heavy climbs and rainfalls, the room I was sleeping in was like a prison cell to a normal human. I can feel the ice escape my gasping lungs, as if breathing through a glacier; I kept gasping the gelatin-like material into my lungs while I dreamt my little dream. Very soon I would realize that I had to awaken into the corrupted sin humans made. A world where humans lived in...Monsters I can feel bubbles trickle upward on my body. Soon the water slowly trickled down my spine, and I began to vomit up the scientific substance I was treated for. The tubes jolted out of my mouth and out from my eyes, I was able to see in front of me two blurry scientists wearing what seemed to be white lab coats. As my vision began to clear, one of them I noticed had the cutest pair of breasts I have ever seen. Her eyes were hiding behind a thick pair of glasses, her hair shone a silky blue, and a noticeable mole just inches above her lips. Next to her was her partner of sorts, a skinny fellow whose hair covered his gleaming spectacles, like what you would seem a normal male scientist would look like. "Good morning Sajin..." Breasts spoke, her hips were the medium of where her hands rested on, as if wanting to seduce me, but on her hands she carried notes of some sort. Her partner kept adjusting his glasses, and my eyes were fixed on her tits. "You have another mission to accomplish..." Damnit, hearing those words it seems the counsel uses me as a disposable pawn of sorts, and those words always echoed inside of my enhanced brain. I gasped in some more air and blinked my eyes a bit, trying to adjust my eyes better so I can see who was talking to me. My eyes were then fixed on the male scientist who stepped forward a bit with nervousness it seemed. He adjusted his glasses a bit and said. "We-well...E-e-everything seems to be in operational status..." He was hesitant for a bit, turning back a bit to look at tits with this nervous expression. "...Since the last time we sent him his injuries haven’t quite healed yet...Though his muscle efficiently is above normal parameters, I’m sure it would be safe to let him accomplish this mission." The restraints opened from my hands as if I was finally being released from a medieval prison. It felt good having my senses feel the icy wet floor I so longed wanted to feel. I slowly began to stand up, nude, and about to accept my next mission. Tits looked at me with her gleaming green eyes. I could smell what seemed like jungle scents, so wanting to just grasp her hair and breathe in her heavenly scent, but doing so would get me executed, and I just want to keep pressing on to live in this monstrous world. Tits walked up to me and crouched down next to me, My knee was on the floor as if kneeling to a king, I felt unworthy to have my body open to such a lady, that, and I was a little tired. "Hey...” her heavenly voice started. “After this you can finally have a break..." She smiled a bit and scratched behind my ears. Somehow she knew that I liked it, but today it seemed like I first met her, and it was obvious on the way she was treating me that she knew my entire lifetime. "Now..." She stood up and looked at her clipboard. "Your mission is simple, investigate and eliminate the terrorist group in sector 4 in a urban city called 'Talon' not to far from where this lab is...And Sajin..." My eyes turned and looked up at her once again. "This is the last time the government wants you...When your done you can stay at my place..." She winked and walked out of the room with a glamorous walk. Her ass shifted like how a real woman's supposed to...I stood up and looked over at the male scientist, who looked behind him and picked up a heavy box of sorts. "H-h-here..." he stuttered. "Your th-things..." Inside I pulled out my leather pants, a pair of gloves that weighed to my fancy, and a pack of slim cigars for my likings. I shook the cigars in my hand, smiled, then looked over at the kid. "You can rest easy..." I assured him..."I’m not going to bite..." The kid smiled, bowed to me, and left the room. One thing's for sure....Once I was done with this mission, I can finally be free to my liking, and then begin searching for that 'someone'. |
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Trigger Happy Jones Since: 02-21-06 From: It's not hell... But it sure feels like it. *sweating* Since last post: 6489 days Last activity: 6489 days |
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| Pretty good, Sajin.
Tits McGee. XD;;;; |
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