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| Xeogaming Forums - - Posts by Elara |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable          Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days |
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| Grammar: 9
Excellent Spelling: 10 I saw one misspelled word, but it really was just British spelling so I won't count that. Plot: 9 Very interesting, though the ending seemed really fast Characters: 10 Amazing, very amusing character. Description: 9 Very good descriptions of everything, how Miranda and Jimmy look, and the lack of mentioning the shotgun to the end Creativity: 9 Very interesting concept, and perhaps the first post-apocalyptic thing I've seen in awhile that didn't have zombies in it. A very good job. Overall: 56 |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days |
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| Grammar: 9
A few things came out as odd to me, but good Spelling: 10 Excellent Plot: 9 Nicely done and well explained. Two things got a point knocked off: 1) I had no idea where this was, 2) you changed the name of the town halfway through to Paradise Hills. Also, 204 over is a bit much, but I can accept it. Characters: 9 Sharon seemed a bit flat, but she is a background character. I felt that Benjamin was very well rounded and made a great protagonist. Mr. Berger was also very intriguing and I was sad he didn't have more of a role. Description: 9 Beautiful description, you really made the scenery pop out. Could have described the way that Benjamin and Sharon looked, but everything else was amazing. Creativity: 10 A town that does it's own Reaping is not something that I have come across before. The idea of cheating death is, but not in such a way. Honestly, I really enjoyed it. Great job. Overall: 56 |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days |
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| That would be fine, Phoenix. More judges are always welcome, and this is part of the Xeogaming birthday celebration so we want as many people to participate as we can.
I have posted my scores, you all did very well. I am definitely going to need everyone to get some judging in by Saturday so that we can get final ruling. I have spoken with Bitmap about making the winner a custom userbar like the one in my signature, that will flash between the name of the story and "Winner XGF Story Competition 2010". That is your prize. Now go, judge people, judge! |
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Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days
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Fuck yeah! It's the big kid's playground |
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Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days
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alexanyways... why did you let Golum in? Look at the mess he has made!
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*looks at the room full of guys* Uh... did I enter the wrong thread?
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Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days
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Don't you mean penguin? |
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Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days
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Thanks, Xeios. I will read it momentarily. |
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Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days
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Short, but good. Good imagery, though a bit fast in the description. I am sorry it didn't make it in for the competition. |
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Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days
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Yeah... I will admit that I did consider my scoring based on how fast you wrote it. |
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Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days
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For the record, spelling is there precisely because spell-checkers exist. Half the time they miss things, and if the writer cannot be bothered to go over their own story manually then I feel they should lose points for it. |
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Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days
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Such a horrible disease. I have watched it destroy so many people, and it seems sadder and more painful each time. Don't they have some new meds that are supposed to stop its progression or something? |
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Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days
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That is disgusting, the hotel should be sued and they better not have tossed that evidence. |
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Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days
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MTV? Sounds interesting. When will you know if you have the interview? |
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Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days
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Glad it was only something minor. It would have been very hard get the same treatment that Hanks' character had. |
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Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 268 days Last activity: 268 days
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Green Lantern rapping? Honestly I thought it was not that cool. Yowza? People still say that? |
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