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True Flight

The One








Since: 08-21-04

Since last post: 2689 days
Last activity: 2674 days
Posted on 03-02-06 09:58 PM Link | Quote
A pain writhing beneath my back's skin,
It burns to the bone.
For some odd reason,
I feel like something miraculous is going to happen.
What will become of me?
What will I do?

The pain grows.
It burns and it stings so much,
I figured it out.
In my back..
If they would only grow some more.

Blood drips down my back little by little,
The pain grows a bit,
I can't stand it anymore,
OUT OF MY BACK,
Out!

They won't budge,
Why? Why?
What's going on?
All of a suuden, a hand comes to my back,
A comfort covers my body.

"Rest, be patient," a voice says.
I closed my eyes as sweat covered my face,
There's nothing there, I thought, no one's there.
"Shh... stop thinking and focus."

I closed my eyes and let the secureness fill me up.
It overflowed my heart
to the point where I felt no pain.
What is this?
Out the pressure came from my back.
not a single drop of blood sprayed,
Where?

I looked over and smiled,
Pure white,
White as snow,
Wings of my own.
Wings to fly with.
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#1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt








Since: 09-05-04
From: His Laughin' Place

Since last post: 4344 days
Last activity: 4338 days
Posted on 03-03-06 12:19 AM Link | Quote
Thats excellent! Now why diddnt you tell me that you were gonna post this?

I think the feeling of having someone there while your growing is a cool way of adding emotion to this poem...Excellent job
True Flight

The One








Since: 08-21-04

Since last post: 2689 days
Last activity: 2674 days
Posted on 03-03-06 05:21 PM Link | Quote
it just struck my mind that's all. I just thought I'd post something up like this a while back, but I couldn't end it.
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